Deliah Linsay Adams
- member since June 11, 2012
Deliah Linsay Adams’s last login was Thursday, July 26, 2012.
Hi Deliah I have enjoyed your book and posted a review.
I do ask that you have a look and read the kindle version of your book. Some of the block page phrases have unfinished words in the kindle edition.
The white feathers you found represent spiritual truths.
Apart from my own book you may find the Arcana Coelestia by Emanuel Swedenborg to your likeing. He explains a lot of your experiances in this book with a lot more detail. You can Google this and read the free version online.
You may be destined to be a teacher in the future.
I'm not saying I don't like the butterfly, sometimes when you scroll through book covers on amazon your title would be missed due to the small print.
As an added sidenote in my own book I have mentioned the butterfly in relation to a metamorphosis process comparable to mankind. This I have done on more than one occasion.
I like your mindset judging only from your first chapter.
I have not enjoyed great sales, I agree with you about the two year time frame.
Subject matter is quite cyclical. Look what is selling now the lighter shades series which are not well written yet are selling like hotcakes.
Who would have thought female bondage to be this popular. What is more extroadinary is that there are more female than male readers!
God is out of vogue at the moment. During 911 book sales on God related subjects elevated sharply.
I made mention of two things that could draw readers to your book.
One, Your book cover title appears too small. The butterfly will draw young children to the book if this is your audience.
Two, A title change to the Falling out with the "I Am". Or something to that nature, reason being vogue or fashion with todays society.
Let me explain. Recently Pete Webber won the US tenpin open. He screamed in joy I Am and instantly the media converged, more on what he said than what he did. You tube has posted a record amound of hits on this event, once again not on the bowling but what he said.
Thank you for adding my works to you shelf. I trust that one day you will own them, therefore placing yourself to be in a position to enjoy or dislike the work I have done. Should you make a purchase the book version has many pictures that are not included in the kindle version.
That being said I am now starting on your novel.
Stay Inspired for this is what is kept in ones remains (the soul).
Hi Deliah thank you for the following, your book has been on my shelf for a week now and in due time I will review it.
Since my own novel is of a subject matter that is to your liking I would be inspired if you were to add it to your shelf, as well as give it your review.
I hope you are here to help others and not just self promote.
I have already picked up on two things regarding your novel that could improve your sales immensely.
Hey Deliah, thanks for ur msg, as for Muslim women not having their freedom, well that’s the power of media and what they led the western world to believe, but in reality the situation is nothing like this. :) , And No Im not an author, just a passionate reader..