“I'm hedging between 3 and 4 stars on this one. Davidson has crafted a beautiful work, and he has researched very thoroughly to be as accurate as possible, intertwining the harsh present of a burn patient's (detail-laden) recovery with a fantastical story of past lives and love. Linguaphiles will love this book; Davidson accurately includes countless languages and cultural notes, including Japanese, Italian, German, Icelandic, and more. Students of Dante will appreciate Davidson's rendering of the Inferno and constant references to this extended metaphor, including an abridged walk through Dante's hell and structuring the book into 33 chapters (to parallel Dante's 33 cantos).
However, this is clearly Davidson's first novel. His prose is often sweeping and including many details from literature and his research, yet he has not yet learned the art of subtlety. Davidson has fallen into the age-old trap of telling rather than showing. He instantly translates every detail rather than trust the reader's intelligence, and thus sometimes there is the effect that he is smacking the reader on the head with what he wants to say.
All in all, what I found most lacking what a clear sense of voice. The unnamed persona narrates the whole work (except for the chapters when Marrianne tells her stories... the shift of "I"s and "you"s was initially very disorienting) yet his voice is not consistent nor does it grow, but it alternates page by page. Sometimes overtly sexual and profane, Davidson then backs off to a softer tone reminiscent of a romance novel or fanfiction. He needs to more clearly find his voice if he wants to speak in the voice of the persona. Furthermore, Marrianne was too much. Naturally it is a stunning beauty (work on those descriptions of her please) who throws herself (nakedly) at the charred narrator. Eccentric characters are fascinating, but there is nothing about Marrianne that a reader can connect with, and thus she remains unreal and flat. His minor characters are great--I loved Nan and Gregor and Sayuri (and her backstory!).
I rated three stars (average) to counter the ridiculous advances that were offered for this work ($1.25 million?! Really?), but it has a lot of potential. Though at times painfully full of cliches and underdeveloped main characters, Davidson's prose is sweeping and he masterfully weaves many details together across cultures and times. This novel will draw you in, and you will rush to the finish. I think we can expect great things from Andrew Davidson in the future.”
Menelanna wrote this review Thursday, May 21 2009.
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