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I have a challenge for everyone. I want you to write something for every day of this year. It has to be original, and it doesn't have to be a novel, it can be a word if that is what suits you. Let the games begin, and may the words be with you!

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    Hi!

    My name is K Y and I write just for fun! I'va also posted about a novel, so if you're looking for something original instead, just skip through the posts that have the words: 'No.6'.

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    (\_/)
    (o.o)
    (___)0 bunny

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    @))-^--- Rose

    Under the cloudy morning,
    the endless night,
    the soft glow,
    of a newborn rose.

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    Under the unwavering moon, a women cried. Clenching a picture, so clear...but expressionless, like a blurry image faded in memory. I wanted him to want me like I did to him, she thought. That numbskull, it was so funny it hurt. Painfully. And in a second it was gone. Only a pool of scarlet tears were left in the quiet night...

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    Away, and mock the time with fairest show:
    False face must hide what the false heart doth know.
    -Macbeth Act I Scene VII

    Under the darkest hour,
    the scarlet snow,
    You promised me,
    You'll never let me go...
    yet, where are you now?

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    I am the one without hope, the word without echoes,
    he who lost everything and he who had everything.

    Last hawser, in you creaks my last longing.
    In my barren land you are the final rose.

    - Neruda, Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair

    I was tightly gripping on to tomorrow, my future, my life...
    My beloved in this futile, arid dessert,
    Please I begged...
    Please...stay with me forever...and ever, til the end of time...

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    <span>Passage from "No.6", a japanese sci-fi novel by Atsuko Asano (translated in english by http://9th-ave.blogspot.com/)</span>

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    In No. 6, those under forty years of age consisted the majority of the age demographic. It was a young city. Because of this, the odd elderly person she passed on the street stood out all the more sorely.
    I'd do anything to avoid growing old.
    She was sick of seeing obese, white-haired women; knobbly, wrinkly old men and the like.
    The woman worked as a nurse in the Municipal Central Hospital, which was directly managed by the Health and Hygiene Bureau. She was currently in charge of the elderly wing. Despite the fact that she loathed them, she had to deal with the elderly every day.
    Why do they bother even staying alive?
    The woman swept a hand through her long, chestnut-brown hair which she prided herself upon. She couldn't bear the thought of this hair turning white, and having wrinkles and spots appear on her face. I'd rather die before I end up looking like that.
    She was serious. No. 6 had top-notch terminal care. Some said that no other city could compare.
    Once the elderly reached a certain age and received a notification from the city, they were entitled to live in a place called the Twilight Cottage, regardless of their social class, sex, or personal history.
    The Twilight Cottage was an ideal facility that the city had built so that the elderly could spend the rest of their lives in abundance and comfort. People said it was like heaven for them: medical facilities for palliative care were a given; all things that threatened to hurt them, whether it be pain, suffering, or distress, were removed. It was a facility under direct control of the city, and from the woman's workplace at the Central Hospital, a few elderly people would be escorted to Twilight Cottage each week. It was not disclosed what age or what criteria determined when people were sent to the Cottage. Though not many, there were still some elderly who died from illness or unfortunate accident even before obtaining the right to live in the Twilight Cottage. That was why the elderly unanimously rejoiced upon receiving news of residency.
    It was the same with the woman whose application for residency had passed yesterday. She was ill with a disease that had been declared incurable even by No. 6's stellar medical technology.
    "I'm so glad. Now I can spend the rest of my few years in peace. I give my gratitude to God and the city for their compassion."
    The woman, who had said she was a strong believer in God, had clasped her hands at her breast, and had murmured words of prayer before leaving the hospital wing.
    The Twilight Cottage. The woman didn't know where it was located. The city had also not disclosed its address. But the woman had no interest whatsoever in the Twilight Cottage.
    The woman hated elderly people. Her disgust was a side of the same coin of fear that she felt toward growing old herself. The woman was young and beautiful. She wanted to stay young and beautiful forever. Through her work, she had heard rumours that the city was focusing more than ever its medical research on understanding the mechanism of life. She had also heard that amongst that, the city was investing considerable funds in molecular research having to do with ageing.
    If a drug to suppress ageing were to be developed ― if she could stay like this, and never grow old ― how splendid it would be. She wanted them to succeed soon, as soon as possible.
    She was almost at the station. Her parents were waiting at home, in a little house in a town two stations away. A man and woman just entering their senior years, they were both harpy, neurotic, and pretentious. They still complained that their daughter had not been ranked highest by the city in any field. She didn't want to grow old like that.
    The woman stepped into view of the reflective shop window. I'm on my way home from work, so I guess it can't be helped that I look a little tired. But, still beautiful. My hair, my skin ― still youthful, still beautiful.
    She would do some shopping before going home. In the shop window, she could see the lavish dresses, tasteful shoes, and practical pantsuits that lined the store. In this city, she could attain whatever she desired. Of course, they were limited to things within her financial range.
    Excluding the small part of the population that wallowed piteously in Lost Town, city residents had no problem obtaining everything they needed, as long as they weren't after the most premium-class things. They could obtain clothes, food, and residence without difficulty.
    It wasn't nearly as good as it was for Chronos residents, but it was much better than the people of Lost Town. She lived a relatively comfortable life.
    The woman was satisfied with her position. She wanted to enjoy more of her youth, her beauty, comfort, and the life that lay ahead of her.
    Her feet stopped. A pair of shoes displayed in the window had caught her eye. They were light-pink pumps. Winter had just begun, but the spring collection was already being put out. The pink pumps glowed: there they were, earlier than any other store; faster than anyone else; ahead, ahead; forward, forward, they invited her.
    The Holy Celebration was next week. It was a day that marked the founding of the city. Parties and celebratory events would be held all over town. The woman, too, was planning to attend two parties.
    I'll buy these shoes. And I'll buy a light-peach dress to match. It'll look splendid on me, I just know it.
    Just as a satisfied smile spread over her face, she was struck with a sudden dizziness. After her brief bout, the base of her neck grew hot.
    What's wrong with me? ― I feel tired ― My body feels heavy.
    Her legs felt weak. She felt nauseous.
    I have to rest somewhere...
    She entered an alleyway between two shops. There was supposed to be a clinic run by the Central Hospital through this alley.
    I just have to get there...
    Her neck was burning. She felt like there was something wriggling underneath her skin. She felt the unfamiliar and disturbing sensation of her body being wrung dry.
    What―?
    She staggered, and collapsed. Her purse flew open, and its contents scattered. The woman extended her hand to pick her things up, and screamed when she realized what she saw.
    Spots ― black spots, like senile plaque, and several of them, were appearing. Her skin rapidly lost moisture and began to crack.
    This can't be―what―what's happening―?
    The woman snatched her mirror, and peered into it. She shrieked again. But her voice was hoarse, and what came out was barely a whisper.
    My face― my face―
    Her face, which had been so beautiful moments before, was changing rapidly before her eyes. Wrinkles creased her skin, spots marred it, and her hair began falling out.
    Something wriggled at the base of her neck. There was something living inside her body. The woman, seized by fear, realized that her body was being taken over by something else.
    No, help me― Mom―Dad― save me―
    The faces of her mother and father appeared before her eyes.
    Mom, Dad...
    Her fingers, extended in plea, grasped thin air. Unconsciousness overcame her.
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    -A REALLY LONG PASSAGE FROM MY FAVORITE NOVEL "NO.6"

    I recommend everyone to try reading this novel! It's originally in japanese, but some websites/blogs like
    http://9th-ave.blogspot.com/ and http://ninteenpointzerofour.wordpress.com/ have english translated version of it. It might be a little confusing at times (because of the japanese culture, etc.) it is still a great read. Try reading it!

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    Humans were born from the eye of Ra. Ra was the creator of heaven, earth, and all things. Since he was the Sun, and also the ruler of the gods, it was decided that he would become the first King on earth.
    -Egyptian myth 'The Beginning of Heaven and Earth'

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    Ra stared at them; the foolish ones. The filthy ones. The sinful ones. A glimmer shone in his eyes as thunder and lightning roared and screamed at them. In a second, they were gone. So was Ra. The scene was back into it's dreamlike state-almost fake-deadly quiet and mysteriously peaceful. Even the Sun was back into it's former glory. But all was not well, yet it still faded into today's memory. So will the next, and the ones after that. For the even the King would sleep. Even Iris, could not prevent it from happening with her cunning. Even Horus couldn't stop it with his strength. Not even you nor me could stop it...

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    Another "No.6" passage!!!!

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    It was blurry. Everything was veiled in a haze, and vague.
    But I have to wake up...
    Safu struggled to open her eyes. She bit her lip as hard as she could. There was a slight pain. She could feel her sensations returning.
    Safu realized that she was bound to a stretcher. A white door opened, and she was carted inside. In her blurry vision, she could not make out what was there. She felt her body gliding sideways.
    "Ah, are we awake?" It was a man's voice. "No need to be, though. Let's give you an anaesthetic, shall we? Then you can sleep again in peace."
    "Where... am I...?"
    "Care to take a guess?"
    What's wrong with me? What happened―? I visited Shion's house, and then―
    There was a man in a Security Bureau uniform.
    'Are you Safu-san?'
    The shock in her neck. The numbness that had spread through her body.
    Safu almost shrieked in terror. Her lips parted, but no sound came out. Her voice was stuck at the back of her throat.
    "Correc...tional... Facility..."
    High-pitched laughter rang out. The man was laughing.
    "Do you fancy the Correctional Facility? It seems you've taken a liking to it. I know, once this surgery is over, you can live in your own special suite until you die. I'll have it all arranged."
    Surgery?
    "Surg..."
    "Yes. You're lying on a surgical table." The man's voice was still filled with mirth. A white glare filled her vision. Safu took it to be the light of a surgical lamp. She was pierced with horror ― stronger than the horror that had seized her when she had been apprehended by the Security Bureau.
    A tear spilled from her eye.
    "There's nothing to cry about. There will be no pain, or discomfort. Good night, now."
    Shion. Shion. Shion.
    This name will protect me from all evil things.
    He'll save me. He'll rescue me, and get me out of here ― Shion.
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    Curious yet? You have to read the novel! It depends on your life!

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    NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO.6! NO6! NO.6! NO.6!!!!!!!!

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    "Shion."
    His name was called. Shion stopped his feet. His guard, a large dog, gave a low growl.
    "Rikiga-san."
    Rikiga was exiting a shabby restaurant through its rickety glass door. Shabby as it was, it was one of the more decent establishments in the West Block's bazaar. Most establishments of these sort were clusters of barrels and crates placed outside to sit on, and the dishes were all of an unidentifiable origin. The stench of strong spirits and some mysterious stew wafted out from these stands out into the street, and Shion often found himself pinching his nose. But even so, starving children and old beggars milled about the shops, some wandering in hopes of receiving food, others staring fixedly at the adults bringing their food to their mouths. A shop owner raised his voice angrily, splashing water outside his storefront, and chased the people away as if they were stray dogs or cats.
    And in front of these starving people, those who had been able to get their hands on the day's sustenance sank their teeth into their food, dripped grease over their mouths, and licked their fingers.
    To have money, and to have power.
    To have food meant to fulfill these conditions.
    Shion had learned this from these few days here. But he still could not get used to it. He couldn't bear to look at the scene before him. He couldn't help but avert his gaze, and look at the ground.
    "If it makes you feel better, then give them a handout. But only if you can fill the belly of every single person there," Nezumi had said. For Shion at the present, it was an impossible task.
    "What can you do with your half-hearted sympathy? You might be able to save a handful of kids from starvation, for a short time. But that just means you're creating two new types of people― those who are starving, and those who aren't. Let me tell you something interesting, Shion. It's more excruciating for people who've filled their belly once to starve, than for people who have never been full at all. Nothing is more harsh than starvation after satiation. These kids here have never eaten until they're full. They don't know what it's like to be satisfied. That's why they can put up with it. Understand? There's nothing you can do here, absolutely nothing."
    Nezumi had spat those words, and strode out of the room. But before that, he had stopped abruptly before the door, and turned around. A brown dog was sprawled off to the side.
    "So Inukashi's lent this dog to you as your bodyguard, huh? And I hear your wages were a little more flush than usual. Looks like you've become his favourite."
    "He says he'll let me continue working for him. He asked me to clean the guest rooms and take care of the dogs."
    "And you took the job?"
    "Of course," Shion replied enthusiastically. "I was so happy, I thanked him over and over again."
    Nezumi sneered.
    "Will you look at that. Mr. No. 6 Elite is rejoicing over a housecleaning and dog-keeping job. It should be interesting to see how much lower you're going to stoop."
    "I don't think I'm stooping," Shion said promptly. "You'd agree, wouldn't you? You don't think this is stooping at all."
    Nezumi's shapely face contorted slightly. He hunched his shoulders.
    "Oh yeah, Shion. You got paid by Inukashi today, didn't you? Go out and buy some dried meat and bread."
    "At the market?"
    "You don't know any other place to buy food, do you?" Nezumi said sarcastically.
    "Well―yeah, but..."
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    Notes:

    Names in the story...
    Inukashi: Dog-keeper (You THINK she is male...)
    Nezumi: Rat (Male)
    Shion (or Sion, same thing): A type of flower [like how we name someone Rose or Lily, only in a boy's name](Male)
    Rikiga-san: A name [Just like we name a character in a story Rob, Bob, or Stanley...you name it] (-san is an honorific title added to a personal or family name as a mark of politeness)

    I know the names are weird, but if you read the novel, you will know that there is a reason for it. It does not mean that Nezumi is a bad person (even though he is a Rat, he really isn't) it's just...never mind. You'll have to read it to find out.

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    The King's ears are donkey's ears.
    Great furry donkey's ears.
    Moving, twitching donkey's ears.
    - Greek myth "King Midas' Donkey Ears"

    Donkey ears? Why not a rabbit's or a koala's? Wouldn't that be cuter?

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    A preface to No.6....

    No. 6, what will you do? You, the city that looks down on us in our darkness, and glitters in all its deception and artifice, will you too grovel on the ground one day and beg for forgiveness? But there will be no gods to grant you mercy. Clad in that golden robe of yours, you'll crumble, burn to ashes, and perish. I'll live until the moment the curtains fall on your finale. I'll keep living, and see the end with my own eyes.
    -Nezumi

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    Finally the Synopsis [!]:

    The story takes place in the ideal city "NO.6" in 2013. Shion was judged as having "highest-ranked intelligence" when he was two years old [he was an elite] and was allowed to live in the luxurious area "Cronos".

    On his twelfth birthday, he met a beautiful boy called "Nezumi," who had escaped from a reformatory. Shion protected him, but the Public Security Bureau deprived Shion of all his privileges and expelled him from Cronos to "Lost Town".

    Four years after the banishment, a mysterious accident leads Shion to once again meet Nezumi and uncover the secrets of the city NO.6

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    A hint to show you about the friendship between Nezumi and Shion (or just to tell you he is not evil; don't worry it isn't supposed to be gross)

    "What the hell am I saying? Nezumi clenched his jaw again. What was he saying? What was he doing, getting serious about this? Was he that bent on stopping Shion? Yes, Shion would probably go alone. He'd set out to a place with less than one in a million chances of returning alive, and he'd go alone, without begging for my help, without even telling me. He would go silently, not knowing anything about fighting, not knowing the pain of shedding blood or the chilling horrors of murderous intent. The useless, big-headed, oblivious idiot."
    -Nezumi

    And...What Shion replies...(how he feels about Nezumi)

    ""It's not about reasoning!" Shion said heatedly. "Back there, when Hamlet came to call me, I was scared. I thought something had happened to you. I thought you were going to die. Are you telling me I should've just stopped and calculated in my head? Figured that it wouldn't do any good if I went anyway, and just sat still? I could never do that. How could I? How could I be cool and calm and think about whether I have or don't have the strength, whether I can or can't help you? How could anyone? Idiot!"
    -Shion

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    BEST OF THE BEST PARTS OF NO.6!

    1. "This is why humans are troublesome. The more you involve yourself with them, the tighter the shackles become. They hinder free movement. It becomes harder to live only for yourself. Maybe we should never have met. Maybe one day, Shion, you'd come to think so."

    2. "Go on and laugh if you want to. You probably just think it's all gibberish from someone who doesn't know a thing about the world, right? Fine. Laugh to your heart's content. Go on, laugh."

    3. "I know that!" Shion said hotly. "But I couldn't help it, alright, I was worried sick. Or am I not even allowed to worry about you? Don't I even have the right to be worried?"
    "The right? Shion, you're not making sense."
    "You're the one making me talk like this!"

    4. "I would have grown up into a mild, rational, obedient adult, without even knowing there were so many emotions inside of me. I would never have known what it was like to cry, or get angry, or feel resistance toward something. I met you, and I realized how much abundance I had. And I'm proud that I know now."

    5. "Good-night kiss, huh."
    ------(not telling you the name!) traced his lips with his fingers, and slumped back in his chair.
    "Some liar you are."

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    In days of old, the Buddha
    was but a mortal;
    in the end, we ourselves
    will be buddhas too.
    How grievous that distinctions
    must separate those
    who are alike in sharing
    the Buddha-nature!
    - Tales of Heike: Giou

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    Fun Fact:
    There were documents concerning a species of ants called Eciton burchelli, which inhabited Central and South Americas. These ants, which formed colonies numbering up to 500,000, did not live in one static place, but instead repeated cycles of temporary encampment and migration until their life was spent. There was only one queen ant that reigned over the colony of 500,000. But the queen's sole purpose in the colony was to lay eggs, and she was not necessarily in control of its members. Warrior ants and worker ants, large and small, all moved accordingly to their instinct, and as a result, the colony functioned seamlessly as if they were governed by a great common intellect.

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    How people fight
    By Tj Callen

    Boy's fight with sticks and toy guns
    Girls fight with words and actions
    Men fight with guns and knives
    Women fight with words and feelings
    Soldiers fight with weapons of war
    Countries fight with men and women
    my heart fights with my feelings for you
    They seem to be just out of the blue
    But i know that they are true

    -Applause TJ Callen! One of our very own Shelfari member!

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    Where am I?
    What am I doing here?
    Am I dreaming?
    I have to remember.
    Remember what?
    My very precious person.
    Precious person.
    -Atsuko Asano

    I was lying on a firm, small, and uncomfortable bed. I gaze as a bright light above me blinded me. Seconds later, as my eyesight resumes to it's original vision, I notice the light was a lamp overhead. There were people in coats, screaming and moving. Why? I hear a distant voice. "My precious, won't you come with me? "Where to?" I replied. "To death's gate." I hear a piercing laughter. I closed my eyes, my vison hazed like before. My mind went blank, and everything turned black. It was the end, and I knew it was too late.
    -Just a little imagination plot I created that had to do with the little part on top by Atsuko Asano. Hoped you liked it!

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    I don't like this voice.
    Don't call my name.
    Don't call my name
    with that voice.

    No. No. No! This can't be happening! I cried, my mixed feelings spread like wild fire. I was trapped, encaged in an eternal maze, a trap. But what scared me the most was that I didn't mind it. I didn't hate it. What has become of me? No! I begged. I screamed. I struggled. Yet, the light was so far away. So far, so far...Away...I stopped struggling. It was no use. I couldn't hate it, so why not join it? A smirk appeared on my face. I laughed. A sad, cruel laugh. I was numb as the darkness spread over me. I single tear fell from my face, and I fainted.

    -Just another attempt at making something interesting. Hope ya' liked it!

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    Love could attract hatred, and bear the banner for destruction.
    Love and hatred were no different in that they were both entrapments.

    I love you so much I want to hurt you,
    Tear you to pieces and drag you down with me,
    That way you'll never leave me.

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    Howl, howl, howl! O, you are men of stones!
    Had I your tongues and eyes, I'd use them so
    That heaven's vault should crack! She's gone fore-ever.
    - King Lear Act V Scene III

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    "Exquisite Specimen"

    Upon the colorful meadow,
    There was a lady.
    Her clothes were like fine silk,
    and as colorful as can be.
    Then, there came a shadow,
    gently plunking her off the grass.
    Ah, what a fine specimen to add to my collection.

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    A new, book-like story...
    I present to you...

    The Corrupted Series, Book 1: The Plummet by ME!!!

    Background: My first in this series will be about the lives of two people. One named Brian 'Kai' Emmory, an 'average' boy under the guidance of his eccentric, affluent parents. The other is a girl named Sabrina 'Ciara' Harrison, an average, middle-class girl with good grades. The story follows there daily lives as well as their upcoming not-so-daily adventures.

    Pre-face:

    Have you ever fell? Fell in a never-ending gap? When you want to swim to the surface, but you can't help but be attracted to it, even though you knew that it was nefarious? That's what I felt everyday. I smiled when I was sad. Smiled when I was mad. Smiled even when I was doing something bad. Why? How should I know? I live in this dull world, hoping for something to come up. Something different...unique. Whether it will drive me to the depths of hell or the full extent of bliss, I didn't care. I just want something new.
    -Brian

    I have a good family. I have the highest grades. Wonderful friends. Average at athletics. I still don't understand. I need something, I craved it. I know I'm desperately wanted something. I know it would fill up my heart. It would drive me into my full ecstasy. The only issue left was 'what'?
    -Sabrina

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    Chapter 1- Sabrina
    The Black Crow Message

    Most mornings began with a clock shrieking at you or a mother’s gentle tug. My morning began with a BAM. I was always clumsy, so it wasn’t a surprise that I had fallen out of my bed so early in the morning. I slowly made my attempt to get up and walked inside the white and blue tiled bathroom. My mind was beginning to gain consciousness again and my vision had cleared. However, my mind was still a bit soggy from last night’s birthday party. Too much candy, I thought. I grabbed my toothbrush and toothpaste bottle and made an effort to squeeze the last bit of toothpaste out of the almost-empty bottle and into my toothbrush. Satisfied, I began brushing my teeth. I turned my attention to the mirror right in front of me, all the while moving my toothbrush back and forth. I looked like a mess. My brown hair was all over the place and had tangles throughout. My eyes were still droopy and still wanted sleep. My brown and pink PJs were half tucked and half exposed. I rinsed my mouth with water and headed to my closet and got out my school uniform. My school uniform was simple. The whole outfit consisted of a white collared blouse, a simple gray sweater, and a pair of khaki pants. Even though the school regulations stated that female students were supposed to wear skirts, I preferred pants. None of the teachers complained about it, so I continued to go against this rule. I wasn’t sure if it was because of my good grades that I was left the hook, or they didn’t care. I quickly put on the clothing and grabbed my homework from my bedside counter. I headed out the door and turned right, heading toward my mom’s bedroom.
    I found my mother snoring on her bed, still wearing her work clothes. I guess my mom had forgotten to change into her Hello Kitty pajamas. I woke her up and he began the slow and steady process of lifting her upper body up to face me. “Good morning, Sabrina.” she said, a goofy smile on her face. “Good morning, mom. How was work?” I replied. “Fine. Do you mind bringing me a cup of water?” “Sure.” I returning moments later with a lukewarm cup of water in one hand and the other still held my homework from before. I brought the cup to her. She drank from the cup slowly then settled the cup on the counter. She made her decent from her bed to the bathroom while I headed downstairs.
    As soon as I reached the ground, I went scavenger hunting to find school materials and tucked them in along with my homework. I left the backpack next to the front door and headed into the kitchen and sat on one of the breakfast-table’s chairs. My mother came in the kitchen afterword and prepared cereal for breakfast. She handed me a spoon and a bowl of Frosted Flakes and sat next to me, and started eating her own bowl of Frosted Flakes.

    *Still unfinished chapter...will post ASAP*

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    *Yes the heart was random. Here is the Part 2 of CH.1*

    I managed to finish my bowl in record time. I glance across the room, toward a square-ish window. Outside was an average peach tree who had began to bloom. The peach tree produced shades of pink, white, green, and blue. What, blue? I look again to find a small little blue jay, trying to hide behind the branches. Moments later, a quick crow came clashing down and chasing the poor birdie away. The crow turned a 75 degrees left and seemed to be facing me. I let out a gasp. The crow seemed to be staring at me and saying something. The window was too far from the table so I couldn't hear anything. However, as strange at it was, I found out I could lip read it. Ki...ka..Kai? Em..or...y? I was interrupted by a sudden, "What are you looking at, Ciara?" I slowly replied, "A...a...crow." As soon as I finished saying "-ow" the black bird flew away...I couldn't help but wonder where it went.
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    Fin. for Ch. 1

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    CH. 2 coming next week (finals!), now a fun facts!

    1. If you yelled for 8 years, 7 months and 6 days, you would have produced enough sound energy to heat one cup of coffee.

    2. Every time you lick a stamp, you're consuming 1/10 of a calorie.

    3. A person cannot taste food unless it is mixed with saliva. For example, if strong-tasting substance like salt is placed on a dry tongue, the taste buds will not be able to taste it. As soon as a drop of saliva is added and the salt is dissolved, however, a definite taste sensation results. This is true for all foods. Try it!

    4. The average person falls asleep in seven minutes.

    5. Starfish don't have brains.

    6. Polar bears are left handed.

    7. A duck's quack doesn't echo, and no one knows why.

    8. 111,111,111 x 111,111,111 = 12,345,678,987,654,321

    9. A Saudi Arabian woman can get a divorce if her husband doesn't give her coffee.

    10. Donald Duck comics were banned from Finland because he doesn't wear trousers.

    I wouldn't be able to finish the story, but I will continue to post little stuff (such as fun facts) for this week because of the finals. Sorry!

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    More...

    1. Barbie's measurements if she were life size: 39-23-33

    2. Sherlock Holmes never said "Elementary, my dear Watson".

    3. The youngest Pope was 11 years old.

    4. Intelligent people have more zinc and copper in their hair. (Quick! Go buy zinc sunscreen and one cent coins and stick/cover them all over your hair!)

    5. Each king in a deck of playing cards represents a great king from history. Spades - King David; Clubs - Alexander the Great; Hearts - Charlemagne; and Diamonds - Julius Caesar.

    6. The most common name in the world is Mohammed.

    7. If you toss a penny 10000 times, it will not be heads 5000 times,but more like 4950. The heads picture weighs more, so it ends up on the bottom. (Next time I play heads or tails, I am definitely going to pick tails.)

    8. Certain frogs can be frozen solid, then thawed, and survive.

    9. More people are killed annually by donkeys than die in aircrashes.

    10. Honey is the only food that doesn't spoil.

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    The Devil In Your Mind ~by Max
    One last scream unleashed,
    before his victim died,
    blood is covering his hands,
    he is enjoying his sin.

    It isnt his first kill
    and from his evil smile
    we all can say it won't be his last.

    He doesn't crawl on you
    or hide in the dark,
    he just come to you
    and kill you from the inside.

    He will haunt your dreams
    and steal your life
    you have to be afraid
    because he is
    The devil in your mind.
    -By Max

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    Here is my version:

    Your Very Own Devil

    Happily, smiling at the rain
    Sadly, crying at the sun
    Laugh with your friends
    Backstab by the next day
    Live happily you say,
    your words always pretend

    Proud to trick a poor old man,
    Sad at failing to attract everyone's attention span,
    Saying you want to grow up to be a good man,
    Now you're society's worst foe

    Locked in your own cage,
    You can't get out
    Once the blood was shed
    You can't escape
    Once you caused the man to bled
    You can only remain
    inside your tiny domain

    Now, your life is lost
    By the brave knights
    You close your eyes
    At your last breath...
    Lucky you!
    You gained a friend.
    Who, you ask?
    Your very own devil!
    Just go meet him in hell.

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      Did you write this. Its bloody amazing, Im crap at poetry!!!! I wish I was better! All my poems somehow or another end up being about lost souls or in last weeks case chickens!

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    Your Friend~ by Me!

    Gaze at the antique mirror
    A face smiles back!
    pull your hair down
    Ah! The friend is so near!
    Brush your hair a hundred times
    One side at a time!
    You could even hear hear her voice!
    It's time to make a choice
    Leave the little mirror and rejoice
    or join your friend and keep your doll-like face
    You pick the latter
    Ah! Your friend came out!
    You shout!
    Your gone...
    Only an image of you remain
    She is only skin and bones
    Look! She was your friend!

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      This is very sad, I can relate to it quite well. Would you like to join my group? Inspiring writers (its meant to be for people to write stories or poems, or just read everyone elses but not many people have joined yet.) I have said this before but you are very good at writing :)

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    Under Her Dark Veil by Anna Akhmatova

    Under her dark veil she wrung her hands.
    "Why are you so pale today?"
    "Because I made him drink of stinging grief
    Until he got drunk on it.
    How can I forget? He staggered out,
    His mouth twisted in agony.
    I ran down not touching the bannister

    And caught up with him at the gate.
    I cried: 'A joke!
    That's all it was. If you leave, I'll die.'
    He smiled calmly and grimly
    And told me: 'Don't stand here in the wind.' "
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    My VERSION

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    Goodbye Over Tea by Me!

    I sat there with a lady,
    having light jasmine tea.
    The lady was beautiful,
    at least as far as the eye can see.

    She refilled my cup,
    with the bittersweet scarlet,
    Now i understood
    I was only a puppet.

    I breathed out a sign,
    I breathed out my last breath,
    I should have known this was coming
    The cup of death

    "Goodnight, my dear"
    She said,
    a voice as sweet as the tea.

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    I found this really cool poem here: http://darkpoems.blogspot.com/

    How did this happen?

    I tremble in darkness
    Afraid of the unseen
    Scared of what lurks in shadow.
    I yearn to be free
    Unbound from my chains
    To run through field and medow.
    Unable to move
    From this place I am in
    Will I ever be released?
    My doubt and my pain
    I hold deep inside me
    Prevent me from finding peace.
    Alone in the dark
    Trapped forever
    I wonder if here I will die.
    Falling to the ground
    I Clench both my fists
    And reach them to an unseen sky.

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    The hallways echoed. Clank! Clank! My steady pace produced vibrations on the floor, making it's own metallic melody. I turn right as this hallway ends, and found myself upon another hallway full of doors. I couldn't hear or see anybody along me. It wasscary. As I pass by a small, wooden door heard a quiet whisper. "Ah! I'm scared! If it weren't for your bet, I wouldn't be here!" the voice said, "Don't tell me you believe in the ghost story. Come on, ghosts aren't real! Just get through it for 5 more minutes and I'll split the 10 bucks with you." Yes! I wasn't alone. I opened the door. "What! Did you see that! How did the door open?" I step forward. Closer, closer...until I'm not alone anymore... "It's has to be the ghost!" "Just shut up!" I see them. They see me. "It's...it's the-e e g-gho..ghost..." I dashed out. It seems they were afraid of me too.

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    Really good poems (not by me):

    http://quizilla.teennick.com/poems/23752871/becoming-the-toy
    http://quizilla.teennick.com/poems/23771764/agony
    http://quizilla.teennick.com/poems/23801793/broken-reflection
    http://quizilla.teennick.com/poems/23723144/faking-a-smile

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    As you noticed, I love Quizzilla! It is full of poems, quizzes, polls, stories, lyrics, games, etc! Whether you want to read them or write em' is up to you. Join Quizzilla everyone! You won't regret it!!!!

    http://quizilla.teennick.com/

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    Insanity

    I sat in the corner
    in a room of dark and gray
    until vivid colors
    swallowed my remain.

    I was king
    perched high upon my throne
    I saw the fear, the sorrow, he envy in my enemies' eyes
    I should have known.

    That was before the betrayal
    the anger I had felt
    how I turned weak and frail
    what happened and was dealt.

    Now I was thrown out
    of my once castle doors
    where no one could hear my shout
    my mind fought a thousand wars.

    I sadly cried, screamed, and shouted
    I ran
    I hid
    I couldn't escape

    My mind was bleak,
    there was no cure for me
    there was only one thing I seek-
    revenge.

    I sat in the corner
    in a room of dark and gray
    I wished I had known sooner
    I was crazy, they say.

    My destiny in a single line
    Forever stuck in this sharp twine
    I was losing my sanity
    Losing my life
    to the bittersweet darkness
    Realizing my hopes where fruitless

    I let my mind wander
    I let my mind escape
    My body remained
    Stuck in my own domain
    Lost to insanity
    And there I sat forever

    THE END~ By Me

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    It was a clear, breezy spring
    With light pink flowers bloomed
    There was also a king
    His fate was doomed
    Shrills of laughter and shouts
    Clouded his senses
    He stood there frozen
    He couldn't think of any defenses
    A light pink hue
    Glowed through his pale skin
    He didn't have a clue
    He didn't know what to do
    All that was left
    Was to run
    He ran
    Far, far away from the castle doors
    Until only the night could see his cries
    He didn't show up the next day
    Or the day after that
    All was left of him
    Was the whispers and gossip
    Of the fateful day
    His expressionless face
    Was shattered
    His pride
    broken
    His foolishness never forgotten

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    There once was girl,
    who knew nothing about the world.
    She was taught the finest things,
    from eloquence to embroidery.
    Yet, she longed to run, to scream, to do all could be done.

    So she did...

    She escaped her own domain
    She left all that remained
    Until the sunlight kissed her skin
    The wind caressed her hair
    She drowned with curiosity from within

    Curiosity killed her
    The servant's warnings left her
    She went in the forbidden
    She wasn't thankful for what she was given

    That night,
    when the sun retired to sleep
    She was forgotten
    She was lost in the empty darkness
    No one could save her
    She should have ran away
    Instead, she chose to stay

    Curiosity killed her
    Will it kill you too?

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    There was a writer
    His words flowed recklessly
    Creating life

    That was just random and it wasn't even good! O.o I am facing a WRITER'S BLOCK! QUICKLY, RUN!

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    This is a very short and depressing poem, I didnt write it myself but I cant remember who did, I get confused sometimes.

    She paints a beautiful painting but the story has a twist.
    Her paintbrush is a razor.
    And her canvas is her wrist.

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    Read Mondays Child ( on internet) first. Then This.
    Thursdays Child (by me)

    Thursdays Child far to go.
    Danced and sang in many shows.
    Travelled the world when only young.
    Was blown away then fell in love.
    He tasted things you'll never taste.
    Saw the 7 wonders of the world.
    He gazed at every picture and remembered every word.
    He lay down his heart for an educated woman
    They married in the heart of Tibet.

    But Now he's old with lines on his cheeks
    and despite everything that he's seen.
    He watches the planets through grey eyes
    and wishes he'd been an austronaut instead.

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