*~~*WHAT I WOULD REDO*~~*
- Bella: replace Kristen Stewart with actress who has a more varied emotinal range she can show on her face
- Turn up the chemistry between the Bella and Edward actors - there was no romance at all
- Change plotline to stay with the book
- Redo Meadow scene completely is a different setting: an actual clearing: springy green grass covered in buttery sunshine and a stream nearby
- Give Bella better dress for prom [COME ON: Blue hideous dress with WHITE shrug and GREEN tights and CONVERSE?!]
- Redo first Cafeteria scene - too much talk abotu Kirk and shit was there
- Play up roles of vampire family more
- Have Jacob drive the car in "ANOTHER COMPLICATION" part - Billy is handicapped, Catherine!!!
- Remove Spaghetti strap priveledges from Kristen
- Do raping scene better - more action, and drama, and tell Jessica to LOSE WEIGHT
- Teach Kristen how to scream for Ballet Studio scene
- Downplay Kristen's "episode" moment when she is bitten - she looks like someone is electrocuting her
- Make Baseball Scene a notch more dramatic
- Have Robert be a bit perkier and more excited
- Redo bedroom scene [at Cullen residence] by having Rob look perkier and Kristen change outfit and hair.
- Name the science teacher as he was named in book
- Have school scenes situated at a more posh school, with same science lab
- Again, REDO MEADOW SCENE
- Have Jake tell her everythign about the vampire legends instead of having her get it from a book
- Do Prom Entrance better. It was pathetic.
- Do prom scene better. It was more pathetic.
- Do James scenes with a bit more supernatural/paranormal air to it.
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