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She awoke to find him gone, the only thing left was his wonderful scent and a box of her favorite chocolates.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Jane grabbed the box of chocolates and stuffed it in her box of memories. She'd had it since she was six.

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James T

Everything that was dear to her was in this box, there wasn't much as she'd led a difficult life so far.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny} (edited)

But occaisionally, she would find a rock or something that remind her of the life she used to have.
(happy? lol. thats what i meant to say in the first place)

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

She stuffed the box in her closet. Crossing her arms over her chest, Jane tried to think warm thoughts.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

It seemed like those warm thoughts were getting harder and harder to get.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Jane decided to go outside, but when she got downstairs her mom was cooking pancakes. She didn't want to insult her mom so she sat down, sure that Mom was going to give her a "talk."

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

Jane's mom turned from the stove and gave Jane a searching look that seemed to say I love you.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

(laura i dont get wat im supposed to do now?)

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

Her mom saw the look Jane gave her, and knew that something was wrong. (maybe that'll help u syl)

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

(ok) "Jane." Mom said slowly. "He said something. Didn't he?"

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

Jane nods solemly, "I don't even know what I did wrong"

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James T

"Don't worry, sweetheart," Mom said, "boys can be difficult sometimes."

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny} (edited)

Jane nods, but does nothing else to continue the conversation.

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

she stared at the window, her dog named purole is on the yard digging the bermuda grass

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

she shuffles outside to go get her dog, what she see's stops her in her tracks.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

She started crying. "You." she whispered. It was a guy who had liked her before HIM.

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catherine=)

I AM SORRY IF IT IS ONLY SUPPOSED TO BE ONE LINE
"Hi Jane," he said as he walked closer towards her.
"I heard what happened with you and him. So I was just coming back to see -"
Jane's tears rolled down her cheeks uncontrollably as she struggled to look him in the eyes. How had he found out?
"How - how did you know what happened?" she stammered.

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Janell

"Well things go around pretty fast." he chuckled " I'm sorry I shoudn't be laughing." Jane never considered her and HIM together.

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catherine=)

"No, no, it's all right," Jane replied swiftly. "Everyone at school's been doing it, I'm used to it."

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

"so..." he looked at her shyly "wanna walk?"

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

She looked him in the eyes "Sure," she said.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

She started walking along the sidewalk. "No, I was thinking..." he gestured(sp?) toward the woods.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

(huh? sp? what?) She looked doubtfully over at the woods, "I don't know Colton."

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

"come with me" his voice is impatient yet irresistible that jane found herself walking with him facing the dark woods

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

They were walking along an overgrown path, when he suddenly grabbed her hand and said "You've been missed you know."

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

"what are you doing???" her voice is frantic but his grasp at her hand continued

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

He stopped walking and gives her a searching look "You've changed from when i last saw you. You're not like what you used to be."

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

:what do you mean????"she asked

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

"Because of HIM, right?" he asked.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

She looked at him with her mouth moving, but no words coming out.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥ (edited)

"That's right. Look at me like I'm insensitive. No. You used to like me, before HIM. But you forgot. When you move on..." he reached out to touch her face.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

She moved out of his reach "If I've changed, it could only be for the better."

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

"For the better!" he cried in disgust. "What does that mean?" he dropped his hand away from her.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

"It means............... it means......." She couldn't think of anything to answer his question.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

"It means you want to go whereever HE is. Obviously, Mr. Romeo isn't coming back." he shoved his hand in his pocket. "Get over Andrew. And tell me when you do."

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny} (edited)

Colton walks out of the woods leaving Jane standing there with her mought hanging open.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Jane kicked a rock. "How can he put me in this position?" she whispered. "I can't take this anymore." she ran back to the house, where her older brother was waiting with a phone.
"Missed call on the home phone. You have a voice message." he shoved the phone into her hand.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

She grabbed the phone, went into her room, and plopped onto her bed to listen to the message

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

"I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry." The message played over and over again, until she realized what Andrew had asked her brother to do. "Andrew?"
"I didn't fool you, huh?" he didn't sound surprised. "I knew you wouldn't want to talk to me, so..."

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

There was silence on her end of the phone for a bit. "Why?" she asked.

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

"because i've hurt you so much " his voice is regretful....

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

"Andrew," she starts to say in an exasperated voice, but he interupts her.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

(oh no! a friend? what happened? oh, poor laura!)
"I love you." he said to her, startling her.
"Andrew." she steadied her voice. "You will never hurt me if I can still think about you."

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

There was a slight silence on Andrew's end of the line.
"You've been talking to Colton haven't you?"

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Jane replied too quickly. "Nope. Why would I talk to him?"

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

"Ok good, you know he makes you have second thoughts which can change your thoughts on something in a split second." (i think our story is coming along very well)

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Chloe((OFFLINE))

"He will never make me change my mind about loving you." Jane said passionately.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

"You never know," Andrew said warnigly. "I've seen him change many girls minds about a guy."

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Chloe((OFFLINE)) (edited)

"I will never stop loving you, ever. No matter what anyone says." she said.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"when can i see you?" andrew said urgently.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Jane sighed. "Whenever you want."
(OMG WE R ON THE "PIN TO TOP" SECTION!)

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  yeah i did that because i love this story
  
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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

Andrew's voice sounded exasperated. "No, I mean when could i come around and not have to see Colton hanging around in front of your house?"
(I KNOW!!! =] i wonder why)

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Janell

"Oh, don't worry I don't think he'll be coming around anytime soon." she said hesitantly.

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Chloe((OFFLINE))

"I doudt that he wont come back" Andrew said.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

jane sighed "andrew, i don't get why you're so threatened by him."

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

"You've seen how he talks to me and treats me like dirt!" Andrew said, his voice rising.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

"Dirt!" Jane replied. "No one would ever treat you like dirt. Well, maybe."

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

"You know he hates me Jane, don't try to pretend he doesnt." Andrew said.

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PERCY JACKSON + ANNABETH CHASE 4EVA!!!!!!!!! **gotz me a new haircut check out my pic!! and yes that is my guitar!!**

"But....but..." Jane stuttered.
Andrew held his hand up.
"Just tell me when hes over you." Andrew said, and then, nothing.

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- Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}
  
  they were on the phone, just a heads up.
  
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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"fine." jane said hanging up.

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

Thats what Jane hated about Andrew, he just seemed so pesimistic sometimes

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

there was a knock at the door. jane opened the it. "oh, hi.."

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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny} (edited)

Colton stood on her welcome mat, looking back at her with his ice blue eyes. "Hey."

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"wh-what are you doing here colton?" i stammered.

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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  Heyhey, when did this become an "I" story? its JANE, not I.
  
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- .erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.
  
  whatever.
  
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Laura {I am easily distracte.......bunny}

"I wanted to apologize about what i said earlier. It was inconsiderate of me." he said ernestly

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ReadingDork

I looked at him and strted to cry.

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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  JANE! NOT I, not YOU, not ME, JANE!
  
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- Chloe((OFFLINE))
  
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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"i'm sorry.. i shouldn't be crying." i say sniffling. colton walks up and embraces me.

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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  GRRR THIS IS JANE'S STORY NOT YOURS, not MINE, JANE's!
  
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- .erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.
  
  OKAY, geez calm down i forgot.
  
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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  :(
  
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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

jane shook him away...all she wants is andrew's arms around her

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GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!!

Jane looked up at Colton, at the man she'd once loved, and said "Colton, I'm so sorry! I miss you a lot...... Can we please stay friends? Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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- .erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.
  
  really?
  
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- GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!!
  
  I dunno.
  
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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  hehehe.
  
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Sungkangaw (edited)

"Forgive me about what I've done to you in the past. But I'm the one for you, not a jerk like Andrew," Colton didn't let go of his embrance.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"get off of me colton." jane said sobbing now.

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

"but why?" his voice is full of frustration "you said you want me..and i want you too"

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- Chloe((OFFLINE))
  
  ooooooo suspense!!! im gonna print it oput when this is finished!!! and read it like an actual book!!hehe
  
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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Jane started sobing louder. People looked out their windows.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"colton, just go." jane said pushing him and slamming the door shut, falling to the ground crying.

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

colton is shaking his head..."you'll regret this jane. you will."

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Jane stopped crying and went back to her room, pleased with her acting.
(LMAO!)

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- patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}
  
  ACTING??? what am i suppose to add???
  
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- .erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.
  
  great twist.
  
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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  ikr im awesum!
  
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Sungkangaw

Jane promised to herself that Colton would pay for it, for what he'd done. The only thing she regretted was dragging poor Andrew into this game of her!!

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- patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}
  
  jane is a bitch?????
  
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- .erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.
  
  no she just wants revenge.
  
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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  Sungkangaw just totally changed Jane's attitude!
  
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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

******
Colton, on the other hand, was thinking of Jane's spontainious(sp?) outburst in the middle of her porch...

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GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!!

He knew that if he got rid of the opposing boy, Jane would have no choice but to date him.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

so he started walking to andrews, hiding the weapon in his pocket.

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- Chloe((OFFLINE))
  
  *GASPS* is he gonna kill him?!?!?
  
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- .erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.
  
  idk, it depends on the next person. i think it would give the story a great twist.
  
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- Chloe((OFFLINE))
  
  yea
  
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GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!!

When he got to Andrew, he raised the knife, and...... andrew turned it around and it stabbed Colton in the stomach. (but no one died. colton got hurt, but he didn't die.)

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

jane heard the phone ring and answered it hoping it was colton begging for forgiveness but instead it was the hospital. telling her he was in critical condition. she hung up the phone and got in her car.

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GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!!

She ran the engine and sped 80 miles over the speed limit!!!!

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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  nice.
  
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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

once she got there she saw andrew in the waiting area. "what the hell happened?!" she asked frantically.

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Sungkangaw

At the very moment, Jane really understood how thin the line between life and death is. She couldn't help herself, but started crying...

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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  Aww! So cute.
  
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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

andrew went at her side "he wants to kill me jane....he's a real jerk...don't cry over an asshole"
he touched her shoulders.....

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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  Ikr?
  
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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"what did you do?" she said between tears.

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- Sylvia W~ lalala ♥
  
  Hey, like whaaa?
  
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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Andrew shrugged. "Nothin'. He was holding a knife and he stabbed himself."

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GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!! (edited)

Jane stared at him. "Do you expect me to believe that?" She was mad now.

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- .erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.
  
  lily? you mean jane?
  
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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"yeah." he said rolling his eyes.

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Sungkangaw

Jane knew Andrew is a nice guy, but she couldn't bring herself to believe him. The one she equally loved and hated still had his own story to tell.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

so she asked the doctors if she could see colton. she walked in and sat down in the chair next to him.

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Chloe((OFFLINE))

They sat for awhile in silence. Jane not knowing what to say.

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

seeing colton in this kind of state makes her forget of her little revenge

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Sungkangaw

Jane stood by Colton and held his hand tightly, and then he flatlined...

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"NURSE!" jane yelled. the nurse came in and pushed her out.

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Chloe((OFFLINE))

the nursed rushed into the waiting room.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"hes going to make it." she says. janes face lightens up "can i see him?" she asks urgently.

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Chloe((OFFLINE))

"No, I'm sorry but he's sleping. You may see him when he's awake, though." the nurse said.

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GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!!

"Oh......" said Jane

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Chloe((OFFLINE))

"But you can stay in the waiting room if you want." said the nurse politely

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"okay." jane said feeling hungry. "where's the cafeteria?" jane asked the nurse.

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

jane went to the cafeteria then gasp.

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

it's colton's ex debra

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- Chloe((OFFLINE))
  
  dum dum dummmmm....
  
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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

:O
Debra walked over to Jane. "I think Colton and I are getting back together." she said quietly, as if testing thin ice.
"I..." Jane thought for a moment. "I don't care. Maybe it would be good for him."

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GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!!

"You thibk so?" Debra asked. "Yeah, if he survives. You should totally get back together." Jane added.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

jane felt a little disappointed and awkward when debra asked if she wanted to eat with her. jane accepted, got a piece of pizza and sat down next to debra.

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Kailee-Online,MERRY CHRISTMAS!

She felt awkward and even thought Debra was asking lots of questions. She never answered.
To busy chewing and just nto wanting to answer...

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

"colton told me he'll come with me in Europe this fall." dabra said making jane's pizza fell on the floor.

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Sungkangaw

Jane anxiously picked up her pizza from the floor. When she looked up, in just split of second, she saw satisfaction in Debra's expression.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"i have to go." jane said standing up and walking out to the waiting room. about an hour later the nurse came out and told her she could she colton. jane stood up and started making her way down the long sterile hallway.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

She took a deep breath. And opened the door. "Colton. Debra was..."

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Sungkangaw

"Hi, Jane. I'm so glad you can come,"interrupted Debra. Jane didn't get a chance to finish her sentence.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"debra, can i please talk to colton." and when debra didn't move jane added "alone."

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Debra pouted and looked at Colton. Colton hesitated and said quietly, "Could you plese, Debra..."

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Sungkangaw

Debra stepped out of the room. She knew how much Colton loved Jane, and she was quite sure about Jane's feeling as well.

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"are you feeling better?" jane asked colton. she walked over to where debra was sitting and sat down. she looked up and saw debra looking through the window in the door.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Colton nodded. Jane lowered her voice, though Debra couldn't hear anyway. "What happened? For real I mean?"

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patricia b™ a.k.a.mrs.o'shea {im 14 andi'm TEAM GALE so be nice to me:)}

"YOur boyfriend tried to kill me.." colton looks away from her.

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GIR's secret identity has been revealed! He has been hiding as....... LUNA THE VAMPIRE!!!!!

Jane screamed and hit her head on the cold, marble floor. Debra stepped in, satisfied.

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Sylvia W~ lalala ♥

Colton stared at her. "We had a deal about this one."
Debra cackled. "And you believed me!"

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.erinn-You'llShootYourEyeOut.

"what're talking about?" jane asks confused, standing up.

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Debra froze. Colton stared at Jane. Jane repeated, "What're we talking about?"

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