o8oyCe edited the first sentence of Time of the Rose Saturday, July 3, 2010.
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- Lightning serrated a silver lance through the blackened, churning storm clouds with inconceivable force, jolting the earth with its subsequent peal of tooth-rattling
thunder. Squaring his shoulders, he snapped his head back. His brows furrowed over his eyes, and he puzzled at the gyrating vapor that emerged from nowhere, filling the skies. It seemed as if the heavens were colliding with the earth. Gigantic raindrops splattered his upturned face, cascading across his jaw in smooth rivulets.