The Proposal (edit title/settings)

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“Couldn't finish. Couldn't get into it with all the backstory thrown in right away and the "telling in quotes"
"He did want you to visit him when he had a business conference in Portland. You've never been to Oregon. Brad thought you'd enjoy the vacation."
Thank you, Captain Obvious. I'm sure she knows she's never been to Oregon.
But the kicker was, "I'm glad you're replenishing your body fluid, so you don't become dehydrated. You had to lose a lot of water from sweating so much." (this in casual conversation from a big sister to a 15 yr old) Who talks like this?”

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“51p Jacqueline Andrews hopes her boyfriend Brad’s surprise is an engagement ring for her twenty-sixth birthday. Her best friend, Tyler Jordan, wants Jacqueline to be happy but not with Brad. Tyler regrets blowing off Jacqueline’s confession of love for him before he left for college. When he returns to their small town as a physician’s assistant, he falls in love with her. He needs to win her love back. Will his hot kisses sway her? Or is she going to marry Brad?”