The Broken Land (2012) (edit title/settings)

Kaela B edited the characters of The Broken Land Monday, January 7, 2013.

• Edited the description of Gitchi: Sky Messenger's WolfWolf and best friend

Kaela B edited the characters of The Broken Land Monday, January 7, 2013.

• Edited the description of High Matron Kittle: Member of the council of the allied villages of Standing Stone People. Matron of Yellowtail Village. Grandmother of ZateriZateri and Taya

Kaela B edited the characters of The Broken Land Monday, January 7, 2013.

• Edited the description of Sky Messenger (Odion) - also known as Dekanawida by the Flint People: Deputy War Chief for the Standing Stone People. Son of KoraccoHeKoraccoo He is a tall man, almost as tall as his legendary mother. His round face appear moonish in the firelight. Sky Messenger's brown eyes had a tight look"

Kaela B edited the characters of The Broken Land Monday, January 7, 2013.

• Edited the description of Baji: Childhood friend of Odion, WrassWrass. War Chief

Sandra edited the characters of The Broken Land Wednesday, October 3, 2012.

• reordered the characters.
• Edited the description of Sky Messenger (Odion) - also known as Dekanawida by the Flint People: Deputy War Chief for the Standing Stone People. Son of Koracco - former War Chief of the Standing Stone People & Speaker for the Yellowtail Village. "He wasKoraccoHe is a tall man, almost as tall as his legendary mother, former War Chief Koracco.mother. She towered over almost everyone in the village. Tonight her sone had tied his shoulder-length hair back with a cord that made hisHis round face appear moonish in the firelight. Sky Messenger's brown eyes had a tight look"

Sandra edited the characters of The Broken Land Wednesday, October 3, 2012.

• Edited the description of Sky Messenger (Odion) - also known as Dekanawida by the Flint People: Deputy War Chief for the Standing Stone People. Son of Koracco - former War Chief of the Standing Stone People & Speaker for the Yellowtail Village. <br> "He was a tall man, almost as tall as his legendary mother, former War Chief Koracco. She towered over almost everyone in the village. Tonight her sone had tied his shoulder-length hair back with a cord that made his round face appear moonish in the firelight. Sky Messenger's brown eyes had a tight look"
• Edited the description of Hiyawento (Wrass): Boyhood name was WrassMarried to Zateri - Father of 3 girls.
• Added a character: Koracoo: Former War Chief of Yellowtail Village. Speaker for the Women of Yellowtail Village. Mother of Sky Messenger.
• marked the description of Koracoo as not a spoiler
• Edited the description of War Chief Deru: War Chief of Yellowtail Village. "AHis closest friend is Koracoo"A big, muscular man with massive shoulders, he had a square jaw and a squashed nose, crushed by the same enemy war club that had caved in his left cheek."
• Added a character: Gitchi: Sky Messenger's Wolf
• marked the description of Gitchi as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Baji: Childhood friend of Odion, Wrass
• marked the description of Baji as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Utz: Yellowtail Village WarriorA grin crosses Utz’s face. His two front teeth rotted out long ago, leaving ugly gaps. As he ties his war club to his belt, his blue knee-length cape sways around his stumpy legs.
• marked the description of Utz as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Hannock: Yellowtail Village WarriorA youth of seventeen summers with long black hair
• marked the description of Hannock as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Jonsoc: Yellowtail Village WarriorA stoutly built youth of sixteen summers - he always kept his black hair cut very short, in mourning for friends lost in battle.
• marked the description of Jonsoc as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Wampa: Yellowtail Village Warrior. Twin Sister of YawethShe had seen twenty-four summers and distinguished herself in battle many times.
• marked the description of Wampa as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Yaweth: Yellowtail Village Warrior - Twin sister of Wampa
• marked the description of Yaweth as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Sagoy: Female captive of Yellowtail Warriors - escapes with Sky Messenger's help with another young woman & 11 children
• Added the spoiler-free description of Sagoy: Female captive of Yellowtail Warriors
• marked the description of Sagoy as a spoiler

Sandra edited the characters of The Broken Land Wednesday, October 3, 2012.

• Edited the description of Hiyawento (Wrass): Boyhood name was Wrass
• Edited the description of High Matron Kittle: Member of the council of the allied villages of Standing Stone People. Matron of Yellowtail VillageVillage. Grandmother of Zateri
• Edited the description of War Chief Deru: War Chief of Yellowtail VillageVillage. <br>"A"A big, muscular man with massive shoulders, he had a square jaw and a squashed nose, crushed by the same enemy war club that had caved in his left cheek."
• Added a character: Zateri: Granddaughter of Matron Kittle. Daughter of Atotarho. Mother of 3 daughters - eldest is Kahn-Tineta.She is the heir to the ruler-ship of Atotarho Village and the entire nation."There were people who would say she was not a great beauty. Her two front teeth stuck out slightly, and she had a flat face with a wide nose and brown eyes that could melt a man’s soul"
• marked the description of Zateri as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Kahn-Tineta: Eldest daughter of Zateri & Hiyawento
• marked the description of Kahn-Tineta as not a spoiler

Sandra edited the characters of The Broken Land Monday, September 24, 2012.

• Edited the description of Sky Messenger (Odion) - also known as Dekanawida by the Flint People: Deputy War Chief for the Standing Stone PeopleSonPeople. Son of Koracco - former War Chief of the Standing Stone People & Speaker for the Yellowtail Village"HeVillage. <br> "He was a tall man, almost as tall as his legendary mother, former War Chief Koracco. She towered over almost everyone in the village. Tonight her sone had tied his shoulder-length hair back with a cord that made his round face appear moonish in the firelight. Sky Messenger's brown eyes had a tight look"
• Edited the description of High Matron Kittle: Member of the council of the allied villages of Standing Stone PeopleMatronPeople. Matron of Yellowtail Village
• Edited the description of War Chief Deru: War Chief of Yellowtail Village"AVillage <br>"A big, muscular man with massive shoulders, he had a square jaw and a squashed nose, crushed by the same enemy war club that had caved in his left cheek."

Sandra edited the characters of The Broken Land Monday, September 24, 2012.

• Changed the section title: Cast of Characters/Important People
• Added a character: Sky Messenger (Odion) - also known as Dekanawida by the Flint People: Deputy War Chief for the Standing Stone PeopleSon of Koracco - former War Chief of the Standing Stone People & Speaker for the Yellowtail Village"He was a tall man, almost as tall as his legendary mother, former War Chief Koracco. She towered over almost everyone in the village. Tonight her sone had tied his shoulder-length hair back with a cord that made his round face appear moonish in the firelight. Sky Messenger's brown eyes had a tight look"
• marked the description of Sky Messenger (Odion) - also known as Dekanawida by the Flint People as not a spoiler
• Added a character: Hiyawento (Wrass)
• Added a character: High Matron Kittle: Member of the council of the allied villages of Standing Stone PeopleMatron of Yellowtail Village
• marked the description of High Matron Kittle as not a spoiler
• Added a character: War Chief Deru: War Chief of Yellowtail Village"A big, muscular man with massive shoulders, he had a square jaw and a squashed nose, crushed by the same enemy war club that had caved in his left cheek."
• marked the description of War Chief Deru as not a spoiler