“The first thing that struck me was that he had good names. The next thing I noticed was his lack of 'show, not tell.' There was a lot of basic description, or even flat-out infodumping, and it did kind of get tedious after a while. On the plus side, it was an intriguing story with a good plot that kept my interest. It did have an annoying habit of randomly switching topics, and page-long chapters have always annoyed me, but that's a personal thing.
A warning for the younger readers: it was kind of... sexually free. It didn't get explicit, but the author had no problem with letting his characters sleep with whoever they wanted, so look out for that.”
