Torment (2010) (edit title/settings)

jenny k edited the first sentence of Torment Monday, March 14, 2011.

• Daniel stared out of the bay. His eyes were as gray as the thick fog enveloping the Sausalito shoreline, as the choppy water lapping the pebble beach beneath his feet. There was no violet to his eyes now at all; he could feel it. She was too far away.bay.

Penelope B edited the first sentence of Torment Thursday, July 8, 2010.

• Daniel stared out of the bay. His eyes were as gray as the thick fog enveloping the Sausalito shoreline, as the choppy water lapping the pebble beach beneath his feet. There was no violet to his eyes now at all; he could feel it. She was too far away.